brody22501
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Post by brody22501 on Aug 2, 2014 22:32:19 GMT
So, i've let this sit for a while, and i've decided to do what Luben said, and go from rider to rider. I'm restarting this book, and hopefully I have time to write again. It has been almost 200 years since Eragon set foot back into Alagaesia, and has been itching to ever since. As of now, Eragon has a small city called Aiedail going and around 40 riders occupy it along with their families. Blodhgarm formed the Council of Elves in Aiedail and they have about the same amount of power.EragonEragon studied the face of his latest and newest apprentice. Amazed at what the young girl had come up with, only in her third month in his hall. A way to create a transparent, etheral person based on scrying and having a conversation in the mirror with someone (Forgot the name of the spell). You could talk to someone in what seemed like person because of it. Eragon thought briefly of Arya, and even Roran, who must've died decades ago. Snapping out of his daze Eragon smiled at the girl."I am proud" He said "Leave this to the Council to study. Please, do not practice it until the Council has determined it is perfectly and completely safe.""Yes sir." was the tiny, almost insignificant reply."Dismissed."Blodhgarm, in the seat next to him, gave him a surprised look."What?" Eragon asked."'Dismissed'" Blodhgarm said with a raise of his eyebrow."I'm tired and busy. I will apologize to her later. But you, you have work to do, grey haired elf."Over the years, Blodgharm and Eragon had become very good friends. Eragon had discovered another playful, sarcastic and funny side to the normally diplomatic and straight faced elf. Not sure if this is a good start or not. Please notify me in the comments. Thanks.
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Post by MCAlagaesia on Aug 3, 2014 0:04:43 GMT
I'd like to see you bring some real ancient civilizations into the story... I suppose you could also have Arya and Eragon continue their own story whilst this happens.
Should be an interesting fanfic! :-)
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brody22501
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Post by brody22501 on Aug 3, 2014 4:09:39 GMT
I'd like to see you bring some real ancient civilizations into the story... I suppose you could also have Arya and Eragon continue their own story whilst this happens. Should be an interesting fanfic! :-) Thanks, I'm working on it right now!
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brody22501
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Post by brody22501 on Sept 13, 2014 16:47:20 GMT
So, *Cracks Knuckles* I am sorry for not updating or adding anything new to this story, but i have been very busy. I have all honors classes for school, and then when I come home, I have football to go to. So, with 2 hours of friends, homework, and chores, it is quiet difficult to squeeze writing time in there. However, i will do my best.
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Post by eragonsubhomicidia on Oct 22, 2014 23:11:58 GMT
Great story but the ideas are just kind of rough so try to make them more "fluid". Great story otherwise and I would love to see more
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brody22501
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Post by brody22501 on Nov 8, 2014 3:35:55 GMT
I apologize for not writing on this once again, but as before, school, sports, and friends are not really permitting me to write. I love this story, and will get back to it.
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Post by Pixela on Nov 9, 2014 21:35:01 GMT
I apologize for not writing on this once again, but as before, school, sports, and friends are not really permitting me to write. I love this story, and will get back to it. bro theres no need to appologize for not participating in mcalagaesia as ive done and seen your life is more important
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Post by ThatRedhead on Dec 13, 2014 7:42:01 GMT
Just pointing out since I voted for the Elf/human-daughter-being Arya and Eragon created, what kind of Inheritance fan DOESNT want Eragon and Arya to get it on?
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Post by lubenqwebjartskular on Dec 22, 2014 21:02:05 GMT
Just pointing out since I voted for the Elf/human-daughter-being Arya and Eragon created, what kind of Inheritance fan DOESNT want Eragon and Arya to get it on? well, i kinda think that the ending worked out in the end of Inheritance. sure, Eragon and Arya are like the ONLY TWO IN THE WHOLE OF ALAGEASIA WHO MATCH but Paolini did end it like that for a reason. i reckon that arya sould go over to help eragon teach the riders, once her whole monarchy thing is sorted out.
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Post by lubenqwebjartskular on Dec 22, 2014 21:03:35 GMT
also brody maybe you could make this a series of short stories where each one is from the view of a different rider? that would be cool and it would take less time to write
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Post by ThatRedhead on Dec 23, 2014 4:49:30 GMT
also brody maybe you could make this a series of short stories where each one is from the view of a different rider? that would be cool and it would take less time to write Dude that would be cool. We could meet all these new characters! I would like to see this
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Post by ThatRedhead on Dec 23, 2014 4:51:34 GMT
Just pointing out since I voted for the Elf/human-daughter-being Arya and Eragon created, what kind of Inheritance fan DOESNT want Eragon and Arya to get it on? well, i kinda think that the ending worked out in the end of Inheritance. sure, Eragon and Arya are like the ONLY TWO IN THE WHOLE OF ALAGEASIA WHO MATCH but Paolini did end it like that for a reason. i reckon that arya sould go over to help eragon teach the riders, once her whole monarchy thing is sorted out. Im not saying I disliked the end. I actually really liked the end. But still. I support Erya (Arygon? Eraya? I don't even know)
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Post by lubenqwebjartskular on Dec 23, 2014 21:44:54 GMT
well, i kinda think that the ending worked out in the end of Inheritance. sure, Eragon and Arya are like the ONLY TWO IN THE WHOLE OF ALAGEASIA WHO MATCH but Paolini did end it like that for a reason. i reckon that arya sould go over to help eragon teach the riders, once her whole monarchy thing is sorted out. Im not saying I disliked the end. I actually really liked the end. But still. I support Erya (Arygon? Eraya? I don't even know) lol. tired?
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Post by lubenqwebjartskular on Dec 23, 2014 21:47:09 GMT
also brody maybe you could make this a series of short stories where each one is from the view of a different rider? that would be cool and it would take less time to write Dude that would be cool. We could meet all these new characters! I would like to see this yheah, if i get some time and brody doesn't do it i might have a go (cracks knuckles)
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Post by ThatRedhead on Dec 24, 2014 4:09:24 GMT
Im not saying I disliked the end. I actually really liked the end. But still. I support Erya (Arygon? Eraya? I don't even know) lol. tired? Just a little xD
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